Poems

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Suga Lovin on a High
Your lovin is so overwhelming,
Can hardly catch my breath.
So sweet like honey dew,
Everyday is like new.
I just can't fight it, you are my suga lovin on a high.

Apple, cherry, lemon lime,
You continue to be on my mind.
You've got flavor, yes indeed!
Can I steal you for a second, please?

Another serving you tend to please.
Hot as fire, you bring me to my knees.
Give it to me,
As I confess, there's no one else.

Guide me to a place where I can't hide my face.
Emotions pour down like a race.
As I journey to outer space,
You become my suga lovin on a high.


Music #1
Melodies, notes, and instruments moving fluently through the atmosphere.
Unique stanzas to break the barriers.
Signs of joy, love, and respect.
Inner peace is given.
Clarity of what you desire.